She moved in, closer still, and concentrated on smoldering him with her best kiss ever. She wanted to please him, and wanted him to beg her for more. This was uncharted territory for her. Usually, sex was simply a necessity during the few times she'd try her hand at a relationship. This guy, though, was different. He made her feel like a woman. (c) JoAnne Kenrick. Disclaimer; this a pre-edit snippet and may appear differently in the finished product. This weeks six are fromThe Exception (tentative title), a contemporary short work in progress intended for Decadent Publishing's 1NS series. (FYI: this book's title has changed to Sweet Irish Kiss, and was accepted for the 1NS series--- release news to come -- this news added 24th June 2011)
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I'm loving these excerpts! Can't wait to read the entire story. :)
ReplyDeletethose magic words - “like a woman” - very nice!
ReplyDeleteI like the territory even if it's "uncharted". Great six!
ReplyDeleteHot and sexy snippet!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet JoAnne. It's sexy and I'm sure he's enjoying every ounce of that kiss. :)
ReplyDeleteSpicy, JoAnne. I'm looking forward to more.
ReplyDeleteSounds like she found herself a keeper!
ReplyDeleteA great six
ReplyDeleteLooks like she knows she's found The One!
ReplyDeleteWow! Great writing here, JoAnne!
ReplyDeleteCan't blame her for wanting to keep him! Great teaser.
ReplyDeleteNice six, Joanne! Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteI just love it when a gal finally finds the right man.
ReplyDeleteNice six!
ReplyDeleteWoah - so what does that feel like?? Sounds like she's willing to work for it :)
ReplyDeleteGreat sentences again!
Nice distinction between passion and sex. Great six : )
ReplyDeleteLove the six. Bet she keeps him
ReplyDeleteLove a guy that turns the woman on. He's turning me on! Great six, JoAnne.
ReplyDeleteSteamy six! Wonder how this turns out?
ReplyDeleteThat's always important, isn't it, making a woman feel like a woman? Well done!
ReplyDeleteLucky girl! Too bad she had to go through those disappointing boyfriends first.
ReplyDeleteGreat six.
Sounds fab - great six, JoAnne!
ReplyDeleteWow! Love that her need seems to border on desperation. Makes me wonder why she's never felt like a "woman" before...hmmmm. Great Six!
ReplyDeleteSounds like he deserves her full attention, lol. ;)
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