Thursday, March 31, 2011

sss10

Don't forget to check in with the rest of the Six Sentence fuN! To take part yourself, please visit the link to find instructions on how to get your six sentences added to next weeks list :)

This week's six is from 80s rock book #2
Love in an Elevator
Be warned...I've not edited anything from this weeks six. It's completely raw, and straight from my warped mind. I am aware there is an issue with the sentence that starts with 'It's only', but I'm not going back to edit until the story is finished, or I'll never finish. Hope you enjoy it...hit play on the You Tube Video!


Incase you haven't got your speakers plugging up, or you don't want to watch the video, here's the six sentences...
A service elevator, huh? Then I guess I should service you.” The man swept the hair from his face. It was Angel, f*ing Angel, the drummer from Sirenic.

It was only hours ago that she was waving her bra at this dude.


Shit, breath, girl. “Going...down?” he laughed, and raised an eyebrow at her.

26 comments:

  1. JoAnne- do you do these youtubes yourself?

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  2. Fancy! It's nice to HEAR the sentences instead of reading them. LOVED it!

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  3. @Dawne, yup, wish I could do more on them, though. Just slowly starting to figure out how to fancy stuff like green screen etc...
    Since getting my webcam, I've kinda become addicted to doing youtubes...but I'm sure you all figured that out with the amount that have gone up recently. hehe

    @Miss M, thanks :) I thought it would make a fun change, and I wanted to try out the green screen feature on iMovies-- that's how I made the title sequence with swirls over the six sentence piccy.

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  4. Great job! I need to learn how to do the Youtube videos/trailers.

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  5. Argh! I don't have speakers plugged in, so I couldn't hear the sentences, but the image of the rock star was delish. Am making a note for myself to come back to this post once I get to a computer with speakers. :)

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  6. Duh, I'm sorry, I should have added the six as just sentences, too...I'll do that right away, so people without speakers can enjoy it. Next time, i'll add 'subtitles' so you can watch and enjoy :)

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  7. okay, six added as text, too. Sorry about that, Vivien xx

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  8. vids are the new thing eh? yeah once start editing the story goes up in smoke - good material

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  9. Wow. What a lovely voice you have, JoAnne. Cool video. Love the emphasis on service, the set up for elevator fun is fantastic.

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  10. LOL, I love the "elevator humor" in this one!

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  11. Loved the video! You did a great job.

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  12. Great video! An interesting way to share you six. :)

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  13. OK, I admit I didn't watch the video, but I read them all! :-) Great six!
    Count me in for the blog domination in April... we could swap posts...
    Barb

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  14. Heehee! Is she going to *cough* go down?

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  15. Grr, my connection kept timing out. I'll have to try the video later.
    Really fun six!

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  16. I'm with Dee...really curious! :D

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  17. Hilarious! Steamy innuendo, great dialogue, inner monologue! Thanks for putting the actual sentences up. I didn't realize we were supposed to watch the video for them!

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  18. Fun. Hot. And more fun! Great six!

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  19. lmao! Is she going to wave her bra at him again?

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  20. It was fun to hear you read those lines, with your own intonation adding so much! Interesting characters!

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  21. Audio doesn't work on my laptop. I'll have to wait til the kids are at school tomorrow to steal their computer. Funny and sexy six tho'! I have a bitty blog but you can send me the info about your book.

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