Rachel slipped her hands up the crisp cotton shirt and explored his ripped torso, smooth and oh so tempting. She wanted to lick every ripple, every dip...later...no time for that now.
Consumed by thoughts of feeling him deep inside her, hunger led the way. She unbuckled his belt, yanked at the leather strap, and snaked it away. In a flash, she unzipped him, too. His pants fell to the ground and exposed a delicious delight, commando style. -- (c) JoAnne Kenrick, SWEET IRISH KISS coming soon to Decadent Publishing's 1NS ( 1 NightStand ) series.
Disclaimer; this snippet has been edited for SSS purposes, and has not yet gone through publisher edits.
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Here's this week's Irish fix, as promised. I picked up the pace a bit from last weeks media clip -- mystical mermaids and Colin Farrell *sigh* -- This weeks is for those zombie/tongue-in-cheek humor fans. And no, I won't let this week slide by without a COLIN FIX (see below the vid for your CF!). After all, without Colin, there would be NO Shaun Bell in SWEET IRISH KISS. Shock horror! That thought is scarier than teenager zombies. EEK
Delicious delight... Love it! :)
ReplyDeleteYummy!!!!
ReplyDeleteSo hot!
xo
Very Hot!
ReplyDeleteShe's very good at undressing him!
ReplyDeleteFave line: She unbuckled his belt, yanked at the leather strap, and snaked it away.
ReplyDeleteBut you know me and leather. (I'll be wondering if one of them will put that belt to good use--but am guessing this isn't that kind of story.) ;)
And I LOVE the commando line!
Great job! Thanks!
Kally
Great Six and I love the cover. :-)
ReplyDeleteYUM!
ReplyDeleteMmmm, commando...Love your six!
ReplyDeleteloved the last line!
ReplyDeleteWow! Smooth and HOT!
ReplyDeleteMMMM...commando... love that! :)
ReplyDeleteFun and sexy. He's really deish. I'm totally picturing Colin Farrell.
ReplyDeleteYummy!!! and hot stuff! I love it!
ReplyDeletexx
A.
Loved that last line! Great!
ReplyDeleteGreat sexy snippet for a quick Sunday heat wave. (I might be panting from the Colin Farrell pic too.)
ReplyDeleteEvery time I read a snippet from this I want to jump up and down for joy. Woooooo!
ReplyDeleteLoved the 'lick every ripple' line, yummy! :)
ReplyDeleteWoot! Go Rachel! lol Great teaser. And thanks for the Colin fix. :) After last Sunday, I had to send for Ondine... can't wait to watch it!
ReplyDeleteWonderful scene. If he's gone commando, I hope she was careful with the zipper! ;)
ReplyDeleteVerra hawt! Great six!
ReplyDeleteHmm, he sounds good enough to eat.
ReplyDeleteYummy six :D
Commando? Now you can't just leave us like this!!!
ReplyDelete'delicious delight'. What a yummy description! Want to see more!
ReplyDeleteLOL! Very fun snippet. Love that little commando surprise at the end.
ReplyDeleteI love Commando style... so sexy
ReplyDeleteI'm sure she was VERY careful with the zip -- not! She had no idea and yanked at it, the zip that is.. But lucky for her, no accidents happened eh? Otherwise, ouchy!
ReplyDeleteCommando - what a wonderful word! Great scene again JoAnne.
ReplyDeleteCommando? Drool... nice sex!!!!
ReplyDeleteHawt!! Nothing like a little commando!
ReplyDeleteI'm with her over the licking every part of him thing! Sexy, steamy six :)
ReplyDeleteNow that's hot
ReplyDeleteHot six! :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet, especially that last line. Love it!
ReplyDeleteGreat six. It was absolutely delicious, it gave me chills. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletewow! great six!
ReplyDeleteDelicious! Nice six, JoAnne! :)
ReplyDeleteLots of building steam here.
ReplyDeleteOoooo, commando style O-O, lol
ReplyDeleteSexy as all get out.
I love all the sensory details: crisp cotton shirt, ripped torso, and of course the delicious delight!
ReplyDeleteLOL Delicious delight...and you used the word snake. ::grins:: Thanks for the giggle. Good six.
ReplyDeleteBest,
Allure Van Sanz
This was a fun snippet! I loved her delight in his body and it showed as she undressed him!
ReplyDeleteFab six, JoAnne! I love it! :)
ReplyDeleteOh the imagery!
ReplyDeleteGreat six
That's a great cover! Congrats on the upcoming release!
ReplyDeleteExcellent six--with a most promising last line! Congrats on the new release!(& always a pleasure to get a Colin Farrell picture fix!)
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the new release! Loved the "snaked it away" line.
ReplyDeleteWhoa! Sexy... great sensory image with the shirt too.
ReplyDeleteDelicious delight! Yum! Great six :)
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