My six sentences were taken from my 80's Retro Romance titled 'Rock You Like A Hurricane' -- it's currently being revised for submissions.
"Look lady, I'm official." The bodyguard lifted a bulging arm and scratched his head in puzzlement. He drew his attention to the lanyard holding his Sirenic security pass and cleared his throat. "This isn't a hoax."
"Not to be rude, Mr. Official, but I know what a meet-and-greet means in his language. And since I'm not a piece of meat that needs greeting, I'll pass. Thanks."
' A piece of meat that needs greeting' I like that line.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Six Sentence Sunday! It's so much fun reading through all the posts, especially when there are new authors involved.
ReplyDeleteLove your six!
That is a rock star snippet! Love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, ladies :) I'm loving Six Sentence Sunday, reckon I'm hooked already!!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to SSS! I love her spunky attitude.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to"6" and may I say, You made a great entrance! And the title is one of my favs from high school. Oh did i say high school? I meant grade school. No,what I really meant was kinder garden. maybe even preconception.
ReplyDeleteShe'll pass. LOL!
ReplyDeletelol nice 6!
ReplyDeleteOh yeah, I remember the 80's and hair bands! Welcome to the group!
ReplyDeleteLOL."...meat that needs greeting." Love the title too.
ReplyDeleteLove it! Love the heroine's feistiness too. Great book title as well.
ReplyDeleteOh, I just love the "meat and greet" aspect!
ReplyDeleteLove a heroine who knows how to stick up for herself! Nice six.
ReplyDeleteLove her attitude! Great six!
ReplyDeleteNice! Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. Perfect start. (Although the idea of the '80s being "retro" kind of twists my brain a bit! Of course, they are. This is just me being a codger.)
ReplyDeleteVery fun - retro is cool too!
ReplyDeleteShe's spunky!
ReplyDeleteLove snappy characters. Snicker. Not a piece of meat that needs greeting, awesome line.
ReplyDeleteHmmmm...wonder how he will convince her? LOL
ReplyDeleteSuch a fun character! Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.
ReplyDeleteNice tension. Welcome to six sentences sunday.
ReplyDeleteMr. Official! I LOVE THAT!!!! Welcome to 6 Sunday!
ReplyDeleteHer attitude is perfect. The last few lines are really good. This definitely makes me want to read more.
ReplyDeleteLove a woman who can stand up for herself.
ReplyDeleteJust love her attitude. :)
ReplyDeleteLOL I enjoyed her attitude as well. Welcome to 6 Sunday!
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the great comments, and welcomes to SSS :)
ReplyDeleteNice six! Love the title. :)
ReplyDeleteLOVE it and the title too!!
ReplyDeleteLove the snappy comeback. Almost sounds like 30's dialogue-private eye.
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