Happy Sunday, all. It's that time again, time to share six sentences from our works in progress, finished manuscripts or published works. I'm looking forward to seeing which snippets you all picked!
I have selected a snippet from my 80s Rock novella again -- (not yet published) Thanks for al the comments from previous weeks, I truly appreciate all the feedback and honest critiques!
And, I know you're all like really busy with Six Sunday, but I'd really appreciate it if you could spare two seconds to vote for my video that is up for a Covey! Thanks, the voting poll is up on the left hand side of this link and my video is #15
This little scene doesn't need to much lead up to it, I think it explains its self. So, without further a do...
Rock You Like A Hurricane (#1 Sirenic Series)
Ghetto Blaster cue: I Just Died In Your Arms Tonight by Cutting Crew.
“Do what? What am I doing to you, Sadie?”
“You’re… you’re…breaking me.” She sobbed.
He smiled, his Elvis lip-lift tempting her toward a kiss...and a whole lot more. “I’m fixing you, actually.
Very intriguing! I can't wait to read more! Best of luck with the submission!
ReplyDeletelol "I'm fixing you." Awesome and good luck with the subs!
ReplyDeleteBreaking and fixing often go hand in hand.
ReplyDeleteTearing down to build back up, great six.
ReplyDeleteGreat six! I have my fingers crossed for you.
ReplyDeleteI can totally picture the Elvis lip. And the breaking to fix someone arc often leads to the most exquisite angst. Am looking forward to reading more of this.
ReplyDeleteI also love the line "I'm fixing you"...it made me smirk - good one JoAnne
ReplyDeleteMy husband's line whenever I'm sick or aching, "I can fix that." Brought me a chuckle reading your six!
ReplyDeleteGreat six, good visual with the Elvis lip. @Marsha- My hubby had a fix for everything too. LOL
ReplyDeleteSo male. Great visual in this six.
ReplyDeleteLove the 80s setting. Great snippet. Best of luck with it!
ReplyDeleteElvis ?? funny - just did a blog challenge which included 80s tunes - good six
ReplyDeleteVoted! Love this..."Elvis lip-lift tempting her toward a kiss" Awesome : )
ReplyDeletePoor thing. If she's broken, she definitely needs fixing!
ReplyDeletegreat snippet. good luck with the submission
ReplyDeleteNice snippet!! Good luck with your submission.
ReplyDelete"I'm fixing you"..I loved it
ReplyDeleteQuite heart-wrenching.... Great six!
ReplyDeleteI'm fixin you, actually. Oh, what a simply devastating line. I love this guy already!
ReplyDeleteAnd...I voted for your video.
And...best of luck with the submission!
Interesting snippet. Definitely makes me wonder what else is happening.
ReplyDeleteAh, a little Elvis on a Sunday. Great six!
ReplyDeleteI love 80's song, especially I Just Died In Your Arms Tonight. Great six and good luck!!
ReplyDeleteLOL. Awfully confident, ain't he? :P
ReplyDeleteFixing her? LOL He's pretty full of himself. Nice six and it definately has that 80's feel.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Always a joy to read your stuff. These two are intriguing.
ReplyDeleteAh HELLO! That is fantastic. Awesome. Outstanding!
ReplyDeleteYep, that's a 'fixing' I'd like to read more about.
ReplyDeleteLove the Elvis lip lift in keeping with the 80s theme. Great dialogue, too. :)
ReplyDeleteI'm fixing you. Great line!
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Good luck with the submits! And a great six!
ReplyDeleteGood luck with your submission!!! Loved your snippet!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great SIX! My fingers are crossed!
ReplyDeleteLoved that dialogue exchange
ReplyDeleteGoodness, I hope he knows what he's doing!
ReplyDeleteLOL he sounds like trouble
ReplyDeleteGood luck with your sub - and great six! :)
ReplyDeleteIs he really, or does he only think he is? ;)
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