Saturday, May 28, 2011

sss15 - Irish charm and green eyes

You'll win her with ya Irish charm and green eyes, so ya will! Now drink up and stop whining like a baby. This girl's gonna have a fantastic night tomorrow, and she's gonna worship the ground ya c**k drags on.”

Shaun tsked and nudged his friend. “Hush up, you crude bastard.”
--- -- (c) JoAnne Kenrick. This weeks six are from The Exception (tentative title), a contemporary short work in progress intended for Decadent Publishing's 1NSseries. Disclaimer; this a pre-edit snippet and may appear differently in the finished product(FYI: this book's title has changed to Sweet Irish Kiss, and was accepted for the 1NS series--- release news to come -- this news added 24th June 2011)

So, as you've probably gathered, I shared from a new wip (work in progress) this week. I know, I know. You wanted more Skar. BUT, once it got out that Colin Farrell was the inspiration for the character (Shaun Bell) in a short I just started (intended for 1NS), I was more or less begged to share from this wip instead. Hope you enjoyed it. As always, your comments etc.. are truly appreciated and encouraged.
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34 comments:

  1. Love it! I can hear it perfectly!

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  2. HAHA! Very funny. Thanks for the laugh, hun. Awesome job.

    Best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  3. Lol JoAnne- humor- love it
    Dawne P

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  4. Love this snippet! So glad you shared it!

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  5. Irish charm and green eyes are a wonderful combo! Love the snippet.

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  6. Very funny, and I hope encouraging for him! Thanks!

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  7. This reminds me of the Irish brothers I used to share an office with. Their banter sounded exactly like this! Great job!

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  8. Colin Farrell? Sign me up! Love the tidbit, made me laugh. :)

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  9. Everything you write is always so fantastic. I loved this.

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  10. lol, brilliant! Especially love that last line!

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  11. ROFL! I had no idea a cock big enough to drag on the ground was an Irish charm.

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  12. Thanks for commenting, all xxx Awesome, I'm so glad I made you all laugh :)

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  13. Love the six. Hope someone's not full of blarney

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  14. Very charming man indeed. Great six!

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  15. Oh, my! The ground it drags on, eh? That's quite an image.

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  16. Spot on! I can see them together, the nudge and wink when his friend says that line. Nicely done. Can't wait to read more. :)

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  17. Love your six! Funny, sexy...can't wait until this ocmes out...so to speak! lol.

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  18. This is CLASSIC! Wonderful visual this dialogue paints.

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  19. Great dialog between a couple of guys. Can't wait to hear more of this story.

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  20. Great funny dialog, and the tasty Colin Farrell pic complements it beautifully!

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  21. Sexy pic of Collin! And, I loved your dialogue here. Witty and entertaining!

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  22. she's gonna worship the ground ya c**k drags on.” <--- That bit made me LOL.

    And Colin...NOM

    Love it!
    Lori

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  23. very good dialog and the image at the end? whew....can I be 'her?"
    cheers
    Liz

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  24. LOL Now that made me laugh.

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  25. Too cool, so glad I gave you all a giggle this Sunday :) and hooked you into the world of Shaun Bell and his troublesome friend. hehe I'll be sure to share more from The Exception in my next Six Sunday posting. Maybe something sensual and less roguish, though.

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  26. Love it and the accent came shining through.

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  27. I LOVE how you managed to get the Irish accent into the dialogue! Great humour, great 6!

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