Shaun tsked and nudged his friend. “Hush up, you crude bastard.”
--- -- (c) JoAnne Kenrick. This weeks six are from The Exception (tentative title), a contemporary short work in progress intended for Decadent Publishing's 1NSseries. Disclaimer; this a pre-edit snippet and may appear differently in the finished product(FYI: this book's title has changed to Sweet Irish Kiss, and was accepted for the 1NS series--- release news to come -- this news added 24th June 2011)
So, as you've probably gathered, I shared from a new wip (work in progress) this week. I know, I know. You wanted more Skar. BUT, once it got out that Colin Farrell was the inspiration for the character (Shaun Bell) in a short I just started (intended for 1NS), I was more or less begged to share from this wip instead. Hope you enjoyed it. As always, your comments etc.. are truly appreciated and encouraged.
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Love it! I can hear it perfectly!
ReplyDeleteHAHA! Very funny. Thanks for the laugh, hun. Awesome job.
ReplyDeleteBest,
Allure Van Sanz
Lol JoAnne- humor- love it
ReplyDeleteDawne P
Love this snippet! So glad you shared it!
ReplyDeletelol great job!
ReplyDeleteIrish charm and green eyes are a wonderful combo! Love the snippet.
ReplyDeleteLoved it!!
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet!
ReplyDeleteVery funny, and I hope encouraging for him! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of the Irish brothers I used to share an office with. Their banter sounded exactly like this! Great job!
ReplyDeleteColin Farrell? Sign me up! Love the tidbit, made me laugh. :)
ReplyDeleteEverything you write is always so fantastic. I loved this.
ReplyDeletelol, brilliant! Especially love that last line!
ReplyDeleteROFL! I had no idea a cock big enough to drag on the ground was an Irish charm.
ReplyDeleteLOL. Now that's a pep talk.
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting, all xxx Awesome, I'm so glad I made you all laugh :)
ReplyDeleteLove the six. Hope someone's not full of blarney
ReplyDeleteVery charming man indeed. Great six!
ReplyDeleteLOL, I love his attitude!
ReplyDeleteOh, my! The ground it drags on, eh? That's quite an image.
ReplyDeleteSpot on! I can see them together, the nudge and wink when his friend says that line. Nicely done. Can't wait to read more. :)
ReplyDeleteLove your six! Funny, sexy...can't wait until this ocmes out...so to speak! lol.
ReplyDeleteThis is CLASSIC! Wonderful visual this dialogue paints.
ReplyDeleteGreat dialog between a couple of guys. Can't wait to hear more of this story.
ReplyDeleteGreat funny dialog, and the tasty Colin Farrell pic complements it beautifully!
ReplyDeleteSexy pic of Collin! And, I loved your dialogue here. Witty and entertaining!
ReplyDeleteshe's gonna worship the ground ya c**k drags on.” <--- That bit made me LOL.
ReplyDeleteAnd Colin...NOM
Love it!
Lori
very good dialog and the image at the end? whew....can I be 'her?"
ReplyDeletecheers
Liz
LOL Now that made me laugh.
ReplyDeleteToo cool, so glad I gave you all a giggle this Sunday :) and hooked you into the world of Shaun Bell and his troublesome friend. hehe I'll be sure to share more from The Exception in my next Six Sunday posting. Maybe something sensual and less roguish, though.
ReplyDeleteLove it and the accent came shining through.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE how you managed to get the Irish accent into the dialogue! Great humour, great 6!
ReplyDeletelol, love that last line. :)
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